Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To which extent do you agree or disagree
There is no denying that the leader is the biggest factor in a company since that person decides the future of the organization. In light of this, who is more appropriate to be the leader has become a topic of general interest among citizens. Although some people believe women are better leaders than men, I would argue that men will be more suitable for this position.
Some people give a reason why women can lead an organization better than men. An advocate for this opinion might argue that women tend to be more skilful and have open communication. Based on the typical gender characteristics, females are widely said to be softer than males, which can easily navigate the conversation with partners. Therefore the negotiation would be more straightforward and benefit the company with potential advantages such as contracts and investments. However, women usually take the responsibility for child care and household chores, so it is more possible for them to get distracted from work.
In my opinion, men are better leaders than women. This is because their management skill and developing strategies are better than females. Both skills are crucial for an organization since it keeps employees in order and operates a company. Besides, males are more patient. Different from women, men hardly ever decided in a short period or immediately; they willingly wait longer to achieve their targets and goals. To new enterprises, it takes an average of seven to ten years to gain sustainability, so patience is one of the key factors that men possess.
In conclusion, men have such outstanding and necessary figures to be leaders, involving management skills and the ability to develop strategies. Although women are also suitable for this chair, they still have some obstacles, such as family responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...avigate the conversation with partners. Therefore the negotiation would be more straightf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18644067797 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96608038733 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3551647318 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261877094205 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953552147369 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118514872914 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164024733488 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637005760136 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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