Some people believe that new buildings should be built in traditional styles.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some argue that it is necessary for today’s buildings to be constructed in classical styles. Although such idea is plausible in certain areas, it should not be imposed on the overall architectural design of a country.
With the rapid expansion of housing, the emergence of modern accommodation with somewhat idiosyncratic features has disfigured the landscape of a well-established neighborhood rather than beautifying it, ultimately giving rise to a conviction that replacing these modern buildings with those with traditionally appealing features could be a solution. To illustrate, the construction of private hotels based on the owners’ preference of architectural styles in the Hoi An ancient town has dramatically spoiled the beauty of this town, a monumental and longstanding heritage of Vietnam. Therefore, were there an absence of changes in housing policies to rectify such mismatch, the whole historic site would be eventually aesthetically damaged, which would not only erode the locally structural uniqueness but also lead to the discontinuity of cultural values embedded in traditionally architectural styles.
Traditional building patterns are, nevertheless, not an invariable option for urban settlements where modern developments are an indication of growth of a society. In fact, as an economy becomes more sophisticated and expanded, residential areas or office blocks have to constructed in a fashion that can accommodate new and dissimilar requirements, such as an open-plan floor with a connected cooling system to maximize occupants’ convenience while minimizing the maintenance costs as much as possible. More significantly, contemporary constructions have to be designed with consideration of increasing population, so that there will be the least wastage of land resources, which is apparently the most formidable obstacle to any government. Consequently, should the traditionally building styles be widely adopted, city planners will certainly be faced with an insurmountable issue of creating conurbations conducive to further economic growth as well as satisfying residents’ needs.
in conclusion, it is undeniable that houses, steeped in the history of a country, always hold a fascination for people, which has resulted in thinking that their models should be replicated elsewhere; However, it is not rational to do so, as such idea could impede the growth of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78151260504 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48437541535 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6688254318 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 206.4 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211992377373 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081961903905 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432311080401 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120649759909 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325497661317 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.03 50.2224549098 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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