Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In the modern 21st century, the vast majority of people are more intrigued by this sophisticated world and their approach to being prosperous is of great concern. While some people may hold the view that they should be organized to achieve prosperity, some other people, however, may look at this concept from a different lens. I strongly believe that the former opinion should be each person's priority in life in order to become successful. To thrive in my social life, to be happy in my personal life, and to save income for rainy days are the main reasons for my supporting opinion.
The first primary reason why people should make plans in their life is for their success in their social life. When a person plans to get a master's degree or even higher one from a university, he will have more opportunities to find the job he desires. Moreover, all well-known companies in different fields such as technology, economy, science, and the stock market are always seeking to absorb such intellectual persons right after they finish university. Vise versa, when talking with these astute and intelligent students, they always mention that they had a long-term plan- comparing the merits and demerits of the most feasible approach- to pursue their education and reach this high-ranking position.
Another compelling reason is that organized people feel happier in their personal life. In so doing, they always make plans for how they spend their leisure time. For instance, they plan for visiting family/friends on weekends, on short vacations, and even, their annual plan for traveling to other countries by the means of experiencing a new life. By making such plans in their personal life, they feel more confident. Furthermore, when a person can reach their goals during a year, they can be more energetic and active during the following year. Additionally, they can be more organized in order to be thriving in the future.
The last but not least reason justifying the claim is from an economic viewpoint. People should make plans on how to spend and save their income. Everybody needs money for their rainy days. For instance, they should plan to have life insurance and deposit a budget for that. Therefore, after their retirement, they will not have any concerns about their health issues or daily life. Moreover, in such an intricate world, many children need their parent's support during their adolescence. Such savings would be of great help for the future which must be prepared with a long-
term plan.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned argument, by being organized, people can aim for their targets more easily. In so doing, not only do they succeed in their social life and feel prosperous in their personal life, but they also manage to deposit money for their future. All in all, I highly recommend that people make plans from their adolescence as the fundamental of their lives to pursue happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99797160243 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5792636383 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501014198783 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8167073312 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5416666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20401042285 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748278529583 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440130724944 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133496447783 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206208617396 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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