Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Currently, in order to make a decent living, parents are compelled to work . For this reason, it is important to consider who can take care of children. People have two different opinions with respect to this topic. However, some people think that grandparents play important role in child upbringing, while others think that nursery school is the best choice. I agree with the idea of children must be taken care of by creche.
On the one hand, it is argued that due to working parents increasing in number, so as not to remain uncontrolled, children are taken care of by other family members, such as grandparents. It is obvious that relation between grandparents and grandsons is much stronger than with their parents. Additionally, it is irrefutable that being taken care of by grandparents enables children to learn their family traditions nearer. Such as together dinner
On the other hand, I firmly believe that grandparents don't have adequate experience to look after children, even some of them are physically feeble and inactive, hence parents have sufficient reasons to put their children to the childcare centre. Actually, one of the main advantages of nursery school is that they have trained staff who have enough practical ability to grow a child. Furthermore, creche offers entertainment which comes interesting to children. Moreover, nursery schools give an opportunity to make social interaction with their peers which will help them to enhance their communication skills.
To conclude, both of them are up to the parents and their financial condition. Although how much grandparents are safer for children, childcare centres have professional employees and also be looked after by experts will be beneficial for them to adapt to society easily in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, as to, even so, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24475524476 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88043535204 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3499995773 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354357581018 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108086715627 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626609273217 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197033134147 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503607991468 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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