You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There are valid arguments on whether the ideas of the older generation about living, thinking, and behaving are beneficial equipment for the younger generations' future lives. In my opinion, this is helpful for the younger generations, and I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, the elders have a lot of experience tackling predicaments because they have lived longer than the youngsters. As a result, they can prepare and give precious advice to help future generations foresee, avoid, and find solutions for difficult situations. This is why many companies keep their older workers or even recruit experienced employees for adviser positions to guide or consult because this will bring advantages to their companies. Second, there are numerous traditions, cultures, and customs that the next generation requires and that will be passed down by the older generation in order to prevent cultural identity loss. If young people lose their cultural identities, they will no longer feel a sense of belonging. This may result in actions that harm people and communities, such as criminal behaviour.
Admittedly, there are several drawbacks to older people’s traditional ideas that may not be advantageous for younger people. In the field of technology, for example, the younger may have some advantages over the older due to technological advancement. In addition, they are young, so they will acquire new skills faster than older individuals. However, I believe that technical skills alone are insufficient for success.
In conclusion, the younger generation needs the older generation for guidance because, without proper guidance, they cannot live and successful lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90952323307 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.346296296 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304121068029 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105846174551 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672933374653 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193991276229 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428105512179 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.