One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that a roubust medical care system is one of the essential aspect to ensure increased life expectancy for people's. I am firm on the statement that this trend is carrying only benefits and no drawback.
Life expectancy depends on several criterias, some of them are in human control and other are not but it is evident in several studies and past medical experiences that many of life threatening diseases can be averted or cured if these can be diagnosed at early stage. Here, if medical services are equipped and capable of servicing to the existing patients as well as perform these screenings; will result in longer and healthy life of their beneficiaries. For example, a country where diagnostic centers are performing regular preventive health checkups of their citizens are able to surface the critical illness at a curable stage and they can start treatment right after and that is how a refined health system adding more years to lifes.
On the other hand, to develop and maintain a well functioned health ecosystem it requires money, manpower and contsant research and inovation. Therefore, governments have to allote a big chunck of their budget to health portfolio and that money burden eventually comes on the taxpayers shoulders in the form of several additional taxes or cess. However, it is benefiting to taxpayer at the end.
In conclusion, a great and refined health care system is definetely playing a crtical role when it comes to ensure long live of the people as it can signal early the critical diseases and respond prompt. Though the only drawback it bring is more tax that in opnion, is justified as it is an investment towards health and it is benefiting back to the taxpayers only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92150170648 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68913825383 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0942936336 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140900371054 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529744474232 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644745829763 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857061940495 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619704562418 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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