In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People will read anything they wish from internet instead of buying printed sources like newspapers and books in the future without pyaing. I totally agree with this statement because this could save money and time both and also reduce cutting of trees used for paper production.
Everybody will use printed media in the time coming as the papers are very expensive while the cost which we spend on newspapers or book with that money we can easily by packages online to read the stuff for a long time. On the other hand, the printed newspapers and books are only available in market, whereas, online it is very easily available to everyone at every time they wish you. Nobody will have to go out of their place for these kind of source. It saves our valuable time as well. We can easily find the data or information of past online quickly whether in the market it becomes very difficult and time consuming. For example, working people nowadays do not have enough time to go to market for paper and novels etc. They can easily access it from internet while travelling or in their leisure time.
Nowadays, because of the development in printed paper industries, the cutting of trees are getting adverse for the manufacturing of paper. By this factor our environment is getting worse day by day. As excessive cutting of trees lead to the reduction of oxygen level in the atmosphere. To save our environment or human lives and to tackle with this severe problem people will reduce the use of paper and this would directly result into use of online information more. For instance, some ecologists are campaigning day by day to stop the cutting of trees for paper and people are also accepting this to save environment and themselves as well.
In conclusion, I am totally go with this notion as for saving wealth and time and to minimise the excessive tree cutting to get paper, people will only use online sources for paper and books without spending in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... will have to go out of their place for these kind of source. It saves our valuable time a...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nvironment is getting worse day by day. As excessive cutting of trees lead to the...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s getting worse day by day. As excessive cutting of trees lead to the reduction o...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...as well. In conclusion, I am totally go with this notion as for saving wealth a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74344023324 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41523678951 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472303206997 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1371623015 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233406109863 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839519943479 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787508550515 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172805448278 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920470068538 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.