In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Having private house is one of the main priorities of some people. People prefer to buy a home rather than renting it. While this can be caused by several reasons, I consider it is a positive situation.
There are some possible factors which can contribute to this phenomenon. First, it is not a secret that when you move to new place it will be challenging to adapt the place and people who live there. In order to prevent this kind of situations, people try to buy a home instead of renting one. Second, people prefer buying a house to renting it because of their work. To be specific, some people stably work in one place which means they have a preference to possess a private home. They want to mitigate possible distractions to their work with the help of this. Thus, a number of people want to buy a house.
In my view, owning a home is of more positive sides compared to renting one. First of all, if people have a private house, they feel independent. Because they will not be asked to pay rent every day or month. Second benefit is social engagement. People can get in contact with their neighbours frequently when they live in an area for a long time. Whereas in rental house it is difficult as you may have to move another place in short time. In addition, their children at school will not face such problems too. Thus, people want to owe a private home.
In conclusion, it is important to have own home. In my opinion, people are in favour of buying a house due to its benefits mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: adapting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, thus, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in short, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43884892086 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42261313395 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5658121014 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277908473398 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892701285257 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660084014239 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185453864506 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526583391204 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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