Though often considered an objective pursuit, learning about the historical past requires creativity.
history plays a major role in everyone lives as it describes about our culture ,the way of life and how to pursue our life in a better manner although we can learn about history in many ways for instance by following books ,podcasts and internet resources for example ,it does require creativity to understand completely ,history is not just about our past and how it changed the future its mostly about how we can approach a life and what are the objectives to avoid in this modern world.
students or people trying to dig down history to know about the past should have immense amount of patience and creativity, as we know the findings or the theories explained by other people in the past could lead to misinformation, most of the time the findings or the theories explained could even lead to misinformation for example if we look at egypt dynasty we can observe they used to believe in astrology ,human science and rebirth of humans after being buried in a box of gold , but we all know today that's most of this this are not possible and likely lead to just imagination of people due to less information ,thus my argument states that even though a person is interested in history and past inventions, he or she should even think in a logical manner before coming to the conclusion ,in past many philosophers as we know today who have discovered about gravity, big bang , the routes in the water the formation of life on earth had provided with knowledge through their research , but modern techniques and scientists states that even the smaller predictions have many errors , its most important for everyone to understand that just because they have proved their point that does not mean they were accurate , some theories are still not explained today and require advanced technology and innovation to reach that level.
by all the predictions and studies stated above and taking the errors that philosophers and scientists have mad in the past, we can say that just having knowledge and power is not enough to approach historical data and studies ,we need creativity and patience to reach that level of excellence ,thus it proves that having blend of creativity and knowledge keep us ahead when it comes to history .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78385416667 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58590855927 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.2370786517 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 128.0 23.0359550562 556% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 422.24032125 60.3974514979 699% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 612.333333333 118.986275619 515% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 128.0 23.4991977007 545% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.21951772744 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147189336382 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104219026597 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338741888246 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104219026597 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338741888246 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 65.1 14.1392134831 460% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -49.98 48.8420337079 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.0 12.1743820225 427% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.63 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.86 8.38706741573 153% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 53.2 11.2143820225 474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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