University should accept equal numbers of male and female study in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
Universities have experienced inequality number of its students based on sex in several courses. Equality in quantities between men and women in each program at college has to be balanced. Personally, I totally disagree with this concept and I will explain why in this essay.
It might be said that it is useful for students due to the fact that women can posses a chance to experience a subject dominated by men or vice versa. However, this idea is challenging to be applied since there are subjects which traditionally are predominated by one gender such as nurse for women and engineering for men.
Taking into more consideration, university hardly receive equal quantity of men and women in each discipline inasmuch as there is preference for choosing subject between male and female. For example, women prefer to choose nursing as their major and men tend to choose engineering as their discipline so that certification for specific subject is unbalanced. Moreover, another argument is that professions which student will gain after completing their study such as nurse and engineer is conventionally dominated by one gender, either men or women. This would be unwise if university tried to balance the number of its students according to sex as.
In conclusion, it seems to me that balancing the number of students based on gender is inappropriate as preference to choose major and future profession between men and women are different. It is opportune when students are inclined to prefer major based on their need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to nurse'.
Suggestion: to nurse
...le. For example, women prefer to choose nursing as their major and men tend to choose e...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
...g as their major and men tend to choose engineering as their discipline so that certificati...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
...s inappropriate as preference to choose major and future profession between men and w...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.104 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93693718012 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3843096392 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1110151682 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488676429257 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357790109799 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069538002508 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389789758163 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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