Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Giving financial support is one common way people use to helping others. It is the fact that money can do many things. However, when it comes to countries, financial support is not enough, poor countries need helps on other aspects as well, for instance, education, medication, technology … In my opinion, giving help on these aspects is even more important than giving only money to them.Financial support is necessary in emergency cases such as natural disasters happen in poor countries, they could use money to buy food, medicine for their citizens, or to build houses, to fix the roads. However, in the long run, giving money only is not a sustainable support because after they spend all of money, they will come back to poverty again. Because poor countries might not have the ability to manage their finance effectively, or they tend to wait for the other countries’ support rather than making themselves wealthier.On the other hand, giving support on the other aspects, like education, medication, and technology… has long- term affects and could help poor countries escape from poverty sustainably. For instance, If the poor children receive a good education, they will have the chances to get many jobs in the future instead of doing the same jobs as their parents do, if the farmers have more knowlege, more machine, they will find ways to increase the productivety so they can make more food, if the hospitals have enough doctors, enough medicines and machines to treat all patients, more lives will be saved...As an idiom that says that do not give a poor person a fish, teach him how to fish. Providing suport on education, medication, and technolody is more essensial than just giving money to poor countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06271777003 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73884883887 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.105223671 49.4020404114 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.571428571 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266792920507 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135100210548 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826849192111 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266792920507 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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