Some people argue that it is natural talents make a sportsman famous. Others believe that it is hard work. Discuss both of views with your opinion.
It is argued by a number of people that some people are born with certain natural talents, while others assume that the youth who make intensive efforts get professional skills in sports. From my point of view, I believe that everyone has an innate aptitude, but you need to make a lot of struggles as well as self-improvement in order to become a successful person.
A great deal of people begin indicating signs of skills from early ages. This strengthens the belief of people who accord with the view that a person is often born with skills such as singing, dancing, athletics etc. For instance, Artam is an Iranian child who reveals his football skills at the age of 12 months. His flair allows him to excel, while more hard-working people never manage to reach a comparable level at the age of one.
On the other hand, numerous individuals strongly recommend that expertise can be acquired by learning and that it is not limited to personal capicities. They can be developed by time devotion along with a high motivation to grow in a subject area . As an example, In those of the interviews that Ronaldo has taken part in , he has emphasized on how he could reach his goals as the best football player in the world . Due to him , whatever he has ever achieved in life is driven by countless and continuous endeavours.
To conclude ,although formless inner urges and potentials are manifested in each human being since birth , I personally assent to the perspective that there is a brilliant opportunity to become a professional in any field with the help of uninterrupted practice.
- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 11
- In many countries people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could Why do you think this is What can be done to change this 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children s who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults disscus both view and give your own opinion 56
- Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- Some people argue that it is natural talents make a sportsman famous Others believe that it is hard work Discuss both of views with your opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80247703845 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1065342264 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189638335231 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610254248595 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069259609403 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103400847709 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874367329392 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.