Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that
artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts or ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discussing the freedom that artists need to expand the innovation and creativity which is in their head, we should always keep in mind that in most cases it is true that curbing enthusiasm and passion would interfere with the thoughts in an artist’s brain, however, being thoroughly free sometimes rivals lack of discipline that is necessary for being successful in any field.
Usually, people who are completely free are not committed to what they are doing, as a
consequence whenever it's vital to meet the deadlines these people would probably fail; for instance, in a scheduled exhibition that might change the whole course of an artist’s career they fail to deliver what is expected of them. Moreover, the artist could suffer from a shortage of commitment in their interpersonal relationships and they barely satisfy the minimums of a long-term intimacy.
Needless to say, creativity and innovation could be an integral part of an artist’s life, but isn’t all what is needed to fully accomplish the maximum capacity of one's mind. Some other factors such as determination and perseverance are to name but a few monumental abilities of a successful artist. To fully understand the concept, we might have noticed the remarkable brilliance of best-selling artists who had reached attainments not just by following their passions ,but also by considering the mentioned characteristics as beneficial components of an artist.
To conclude, both creativity and innovation should be engraved in artists' minds as the
prominent parts of their work. However, they have to redefine their beliefs about attitudes which can shape a great artist’s professional life; meaning that freedom mustn't impede them from exerting a bit of control and commitment on their path.
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- The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20 in the last ten years Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend 11
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ully accomplish the maximum capacity of ones mind. Some other factors such as determ...
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Line 4, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nts not just by following their passions ,but also by considering the mentioned ch...
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Line 6, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...professional life; meaning that freedom mustnt impede them from exerting a bit of cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, in most cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30960854093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97791416879 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7993984888 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.5 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276949174652 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11910146784 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384284557877 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13641526584 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430563539401 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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