Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts or ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discussing the freedom that an artist needs to expand innovation and creativity in his or her mind, we should always keep in mind that in most cases it is true that generally curbing enthusiasm and passion would interfere with the thoughts in an artist’s mind. However, being thoroughly free sometimes rivals lack of discipline that is necessary for being successful in any field.
Usually people who are completely free are not committed to what they are doing, as a consequence whenever it's vital to meet the deadlines; for instance an scheduled exhibition that might change the whole course of an artist’s career, these people won’t probably meet them. Moreover, the artist could suffer from a shortage of commitment in their interpersonal relationship and they barely satisfy the minimum needs of a long term intimacy.
Needless to say, creativity and innovation could be an integral part of an artist’s life, yet not all that is needed to fully accomplish the maximum capacity of one's mind. Some other factors such as discipline and time management are to name but a few monumental abilities of a successful artist. To fully understand the concept we might have noticed the remarkable brilliance of best-selling artists who had reached attainment not just by following their passions, but to considering the mentioned characteristics as beneficial components of an artist
To conclude, both creativity and innovation should be engraved in artists' minds as the prominent parts of their work. However, they have to redefine their beliefs of factors other than freedom; meaning that freedom mustn't impede them from exerting a bit of control and commitment alongside the freedom that have always been sought.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tal to meet the deadlines; for instance an scheduled exhibition that might change ...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ully accomplish the maximum capacity of ones mind. Some other factors such as discip...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...ther than freedom; meaning that freedom mustnt impede them from exerting a bit of cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, in most cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25818181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8905088345 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3802801666 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.75 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27143677787 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110215644295 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513922189116 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165991075894 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040947549983 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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