It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweighthe advantages?
Some people believe that it is necessary for each person to possess an item of some fundamental needs for traveling, entertainment, and food storage. Although some clear benefits of such development could be seen, they are, in my view, eclipsed by considerable drawbacks.
On the one hand, several reasons explain the positive influence of having own private items like a car, a fridge, or a television. Firstly, traveling is a basic need of people, especially for those who live away from their workforce and can stay active all the time thanks to the availability of vehicles. Furthermore, television has a variety of channels such as cartoons, and news that meet human recreation needs after hard-working days. Finally, when in possession of a fridge, people would save more time on shopping for food. Also, food can keep longer and fresher to avoid spoilage and money-saving.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why I still believe that possession of some items creates more harm. The first reason is that vehicles bring a big influence on the environment like polluted smoke from transportation, or consuming fossil fuels that are no alternative if everyone had his private form of transport. In addition, it would cost a legacy if every person insisted on purchasing his own fridge and TV. This is because property prices would certainly accelerate owing to the growth in customers’ demand for those commodities. Another concern is a sedentary and unhealthy lifestyle has increased, people just absorb the food, not release it. As a result, many young people have faced obesity and heart diseases.
To sum up, although there can be no doubt that having a car, a TV, and a fridge can be beneficial to society to a certain extent, I assert that it will do more harm to our health, and the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, still, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99016393443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86543121527 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626229508197 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5066382692 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153923229282 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424812996958 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353448671568 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089135348747 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291089614317 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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