In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The proliferation of young criminals, especially those who committed unacceptable crimes has concerned politicians profoundly. Therefore, some people suggest that these teenagers should receive the same punishment as adult criminals. Personally, I partly agree with this opinion as there are potential felonies arising from some adolescent offenders, however, mental incompletion is still a major factor in these cases.
In some cases, the brutal behaviour of youngsters does not outburst in seconds but is the result of a series of thoughts and intentions. Moreover, in spite of their tender age, worryingly, some children seem to develop a violent perspective on life and human as a result of their childhood trauma (parental divorce, and family violence, to name but a few) or their mental disorders like sociopath. For these reasons, if the authority does not apply any serious measures, there will be a likelihood of future crimes as these children get older. Take the murder of James Bulger as an example, in this situation, the two murderers fully understood the consequence of their actions and even after years of imprisonment, one of them still commit illegal acts.
On the other hand, identical approaches toward mature and young lawbreakers are unfair because mental incompletion is the cause of most crimes committed by children. Given that until the age of 18, children necessitate proper training, guidance and experience to form the right awareness of the world around them, therefore, any illegal behaviour during this period is mainly the result of an incomprehensive mind. Additionally, applying less serious punishment for children would facilitate the positive changing of their personalities as they don’t have to face severe judgement as adults and conceive that change is still possible. Frank Abagnale is a telling example of this as despite causing major losses for American banks, this young financial criminal was allowed and guided by the FBI to serve justice and society.
In some circumstances, serious punishment for young criminals is necessary when the offender shows no sign of regret or improvement. However, in most cases, the authority should apply gentler measures to give these lawbreakers opportunities to atone for their mistakes and become better people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, as a result, in most cases, in some cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46778711485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93602590234 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613445378151 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0595189938 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.153846154 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194041578713 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719984528955 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718682745465 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125754309028 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933438618957 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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