It is better to be unemployed than to be employed in a job one does not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often argued that unemployment is better than a less satisfied job. I disagree with the statement because every job has certain difficulties and feeling of stress is quite common in every employment. Quitting of job is not a remedy for an unsatisfied job environment but to overcome in many ways including vocation, and other entertainment.
There are many reasons that someone claimed to quit the job as a result of lack of enjoyment. Initially, the unsatisfied job may lead to psychological issues and other health problems like headaches, and insomnia. Feeling stressful during the job might affect the family and personnel matters. Therefore resigning from.sucb situation might be a solution to get ride of these sort of issues. Secondly, as an employee must need rest and peace from the workplace rather than money and promotions. Such peaceful atmosphere always provide cost effective and productive employees to the institution. Owing to the fact that get out of the job may helpful to the person and the. Company as a whole.
On the other hand, employees who is ready to go out from the institution due to the lack of enjoyment might be introvert or poor problem solving capacity. People must be overcome the rigid workplace situation many ways. Firstly, they can tackle the problem by self evaluation and counselling. Such intention helps them to reduce stress and find the reason behind the problem thereby improve the productivity and effective work life balance. Either of the job has complete satisfaction in everyday, so that it is necessary to adapt and accept the situation and find the remedy is better than quitting the job. Secondly, all employees can take some free time or vocation to relieve from stress and work pressure. For instance, paid vocation helps many overseas employees to work with satisfaction after a month leave instead of exiting the job.
To sum up,tackle the reason for less enjoyment in workplace rather than relieving from a good job. People have the innate capacity to find solutions or problem solving and the use of this might help to find happiness in workplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ffect the family and personnel matters. Therefore resigning from.sucb situation might be ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...tion might be a solution to get ride of these sort of issues. Secondly, as an employee mus...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...f the job may helpful to the person and the. Company as a whole. On the other han...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...of the job has complete satisfaction in everyday, so that it is necessary to adapt and a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tackle
...instead of exiting the job. To sum up,tackle the reason for less enjoyment in workpl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, sort of, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78370176992 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9977142111 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.65 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172304570497 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527552333166 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453828468774 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113999574927 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169312665842 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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