In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a
ban is justified.
Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has been banned in public places like parks, hospitals and restaurants in many
nations, and it is a law that many people support. I agree with this initiative because it
reduces the harmful effects of passive smoking and also encourages smokers to quit.
The primary reason why making it illegal to smoke in public makes sense is that it prevents
people from developing diseases related to second-hand smoke. Passive smoking is
something that non-smokers cannot avoid in the presence of a smoker, and it is just as
dangerous to people’s health as smoking. A ban in public places limits this type of exposure.
For example, after Ireland decided to ban smoking in all indoor workplaces, there was a
significant decline in lung cancer and other lethal diseases among restaurant and pub
workers, leading many other countries to adopt similar measures.
The second main reason why this ban is warranted is that it helps those addicted to
cigarettes quit their habit. A law prohibiting smoking in public areas forces smokers to leave
the company of everyone else if they want to have a cigarette. Most people dislike feeling
ostracised, and this can provide excellent motivation to quit. For instance, social pressure
brought about by smoking bans is often cited by ex-smokers as one of the reasons they gave
up the habit.
In conclusion, I believe that making it against the law to smoke in public should be
encouraged because it prevents innocent people from developing serious health conditions
caused by passive smoking and reduces the number of smokers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19379844961 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63653656158 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8590828962 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288436215905 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108830152941 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828732650912 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085855618226 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719470466403 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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