More and more people want to buy clothes, car and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, there are many people who purchase items such as clothes, cars or electronic devices from famous brands. In my opinion, this development has both pros and cons and I will explain my view below
On the one hand, well-known items offer a wonderful experience to the buyer. Basically, every product from a famous brand is carefully and perfectly produced. In this way, people can use a product of high quality. Beside that, some items from no brands or local brands are not as qualitative as products from well-known shops. The reason is that it is cheaper and its source is unclear.
On the other hand, luxury products also have drawbacks. Having said that, some individuals get expensive items, not because they need them, but because it is trendy. For example, some young middle-class people in Vietnam spend a great deal of money to buy an iPhone which is a lucrative phone which might be equal to three times their average monthly salary. As a result, their future financial security would be affected. Moreover, lavish items also cause social problems between the rich and the poor. Since some impoverished people are not provided with lucrative employment prospects, it is kind of challenging for them to get this. While the wealthy can afford expensive goods. Therefore, it causes the destitute to be at odds with society.
To conclude, paying for popular brands has both benefits and drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01687763713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58176824059 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8047023204 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4615384615 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18410671603 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591504927694 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599458733871 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102759064407 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804141689431 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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