Some people say that rich nations should help poor countries with their basic needs like food and education while others oppose the idea and argue that the poor nation themselves should try to improve their condition. Do you agree with the idea that rich and developed nations should help the poor nations?
Several of people assumes that advance countries have compulsory to encourages pover countries with providing principal necessary such as provision and school, it is opposite to another view that consider about pover countries should be independent to repairing their situation. I totally agree with this opinion and think that it is perfect combination to support pover countries.
Firstly, uncertainties about economics that is the biggest issues in the world foremost countries with the low income. Moreover, total of poorest society it is evidence failure to government for handling the situation and many advance countries concerned with this conditions and decided to giving some aid. In other words, advance countries have important role to support economis situation such as meal and more important is providing school until able to generating high quality human resources. For example, Aceh is one of the peovince in Indonesia, this region was became the poorest province in sumatera Island, in 2004, Aceh have big disaster that is Tsunami and made all eyes focus on this province, one of the most country that giving aid was Turkey with giving money, supply food and wear and anything. Thats why, when some countries have problems about poverty as a advance countries with bigger revenue at least have contribute to increasing the economis.
Secondly, reforming condition of poverty is important things that should do. Some countries must have big effort to show infront of another country with the best result from bad situation. On the other hand, government must prepare certain of solution and make sure in few years later will able to changes the condition such as processing worker with value and standart based on advance country and as a result will helping the own country to being better than previous. For example, Mozambik is one of the poorest country in the world with GNI around US$ 460 per capita, as a poorest country the government and society should be cooperation to establish the state and thinking about best method to bringing transformation. Thus, at least rate of poverty will be gradully decrease and percentage of economis will be increase.
To conclude, combination of this opinion is the best way to making relationship between countries and can give positive impact to vast society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the poorest'.
Suggestion: of the poorest
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
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Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the best'.
Suggestion: about the best
...ion to establish the state and thinking about best method to bringing transformation. Thus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2192513369 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66014160178 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524064171123 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7359261811 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.153846154 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7692307692 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174993582167 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708740847672 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377309262478 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104096792591 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05183336505 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.