Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the development of technology, not only big companies but also everyone can make a film. From my perspective, this problem will have two sides and I will discuss both views below.
On the one hand, with the advancement of digital technology such as cameras, smartphones and computers, making films will become easier. There are a lot of apps available that allow people to be creative freely, edit on their computers and upload the content on any social media platforms for people to see it. Beside that, producing films is a job that citizens can make money with their hobbies. Some filmmakers who formally study and have a natural talent, can work with their passion and release them to the mainstream public.
On the other hand, movie production might require a high investment cost. Firstly, filmmaking requests a big investment to buy equipment, renting skin or filming location and other costs. For example, some film crews had difficulty finding sponsors and led to the cancellation of the film they were working on. Secondly, movie making needs a lot of time and effort. Many stages such as scripting, editing or production must have a large number of employers to complete. In some situations, it also has fierce competition and does not guarantee success. They have to create unique products to compete and attract audiences.
To sum up, motion picture making will have its positive and negative aspects. People should consider it before they decide and think of it as a job for the rest of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96108949416 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61253840775 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7515639178 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213559975023 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064754565255 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718211163081 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122104169984 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305047563638 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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