Some people argue that sports are essential for us. Others think of sports as an activity for leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often believed by some sports are inevitable for people, while others oppose that it is just an activity for time pass. However, in my opinion, sports are an important exercise for people's health, and rather than a leisure activity sports have a tremendous role in human life.
On the one hand, people who believe sports are just a free time activity because the entertainment value of sports is crucial. During festival season people are enjoyed some sports items like tug of war, running races, cricket, and football. This indeed makes them enjoyable and entertain their leisure time with quality game, fun, and team spirit. Nevertheless, the relaxation of mind and body through these activities is focussing not only on the extra time activities but also on the effective lifetime experience and better health.
On the other hand, there are many reasons for arguing sports is necessary for people's life. Firstly, the outcome of sports activities mainly fosters the basic health of humans. Removing fats, and cholesterol with the support of sports has many examples from daily news which improve immunity and that may lead to a better life for everyone. Secondly, many sports have an international value which often brings high economic growth and status to the nation. For instance, some countries are knowing by the name of some sportsmen like Sachin Tendulkar, Leonel Messi, and Hussain Bolt. Finally, sports improve the physical structure and boost the tourist value of many nations. For example, the recent world cup football host country Qatar has much more visitors and sports admire every day.
To sum up, even though sports is a leisure time activity, the biological and fundamental value of sports is noticeable and indispensable nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17832167832 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50711004204 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3866345382 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344059428478 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126693042012 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841287718921 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213438686476 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844327130379 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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