Topic: Some people say team sports (football) have lots of benefits. Others say Individual sports (swimming, tennis) are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Maintaining a healthy body is always one of the top priorities among the community globally. Therefore, finding a great method to stay in shape is definitely a topic that people pay much attention. Yet there is argued that team sports, typically football bring numerous advantages, other people suppose individual sports such as swimming, and tennis are vigorous for health. From my perspective, I contend both of the two categories of sports will do many wonders for human life in a distinctive way. This essay will shed light on more details about those before making the final decision.
One major ground behind the rising popularity of supporting playing football would bring more benefits is that team sports is not only build muscles but also creates a strong connection with the community. Due to the fact that team sports such as football gains the most popular around the world, which sprouting across country to country, attrating thousands of audiences per year. Therefore, citizens easily share the same interest in sports, which helps them to harmony with the community better. In terms of children, playing football or other team sports will absolutely have striking up a close-knit friendship as well as enhance teamwork skills, which can make use of for their future jobs. Needless to say those kinds of sports make a contribution to both keep a lean body and sharpen their memory, thus making a great study performance.
Nevertheless, individual sports are playing an important role in human life in some cases. First and foremost, it allows the players to learn more about themselves and assist them to concentrate on improving their ability alone. This is pretty useful when learning by themselves. Furthermore, by having to fully bear the weight of any loss or take credit for any success, the player will grow to be a responsible, self-reliant, persistent person. Take chess for example, in most cases, chess is an individual sport as this game requires complete trust in one’s ability, speed, mindset and logical decision - making. All of which are difficult to achieve in team sports where many minds are involved in the decision making process.
In conclusion, I still hold a belief that both team sports and individual sports will facilitate in different aspect in human life. Either team sports or individual sports are making a tremendous contribution for maintaining a ideal weight as well as having a positive impact on mental health. Therefore, residents should learn how to balance between the two sorts of sports so as to do more good for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in most cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12028301887 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71188694378 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573113207547 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1424747935 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.263157895 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292476011983 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823475067282 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065997427133 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178284635812 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434653256517 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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