Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote
Over ten billion children don't have an idea when it comes to electing a leader. However society deems it fit that every teenager from the age of 15 years should be encouraged and granted the suverage when it comes to electing a leader. In my opinion I strongly agree with the idea. this essay will provide veritable reasons to this subject.
Looking at the view point of those who are against the motion of teenager from 15 years and above should be given right to vote have their claim buttressed with the fact that teenager between the age 15 to 17 years are considered children and can be easily manipulated by their parents or gaurdians.
However, it is no longer a debate that teenager from 15 years of age should be granted the right to vote in order to elect a good leader due to the fact that the world is revolving and gradually shifting it's focus to the younger generation by inventing sopheticated technology which is well understood and operated by the younger ones since a countries strength is largely dependant on it's technology level. My personal experience is a compelling example to this point. I had a cousin who was adept when it comes to Nigeria political matter and wasn't blindfolded by the little bribe disbursed during campaign but because he was still teenager no one allowed him to vote even if we all knew that the governor elect wasn't fit for the position this regim was a cesspit of hunger and poverty. Had my state granted suverage to the teenager they would have done a better job by voting a capable leader.
Furthermore, teenager should be given a chance and expose to politics owning to the fact that they will be the inhabitants of a that particular region in years time and should be made familiar with the way things are done in the area. My life experience is a perfect example to this. I was given a task at a very young age in church where I was to assist the youth leader, this position made me understand what it takes to lead. if not for such position which prepared me to be a leader I wouldn't have had a detailed knowledge on leadership
In conclusion, after reviewing all the claim in this essay I strongly feel that teenager should be granted the right to vote because of the technology advancement of the world and quick preparation to a leadership position.
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- Teenagers from 15 years should be granted the right to vote 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58795180723 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56422906961 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.345373973 48.9658058833 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.461538462 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9230769231 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308667492255 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915577898747 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869146032965 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177412683882 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519395785894 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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