People are consuming more and more sugar based drinks.Why?What can be done to reduce sugary based consumption?
It is irrefutable to state that intake of soft drinks has increased rapidly.There are multifarious reasons behind this trend such as sugary items provides instant energy and theses are cheaper.Also,the utilisation can be reduced by imposing high tax on soft drinks as well as lawmakers should conduct seminars for providing awareness about healthy diet.
To begin with reasons,cold drinks are delicious in taste.Masses can check different favours and they can taste them.Resultantly,they become addictive to it.In addition to this,there is a lack among people about healthy diet.When individuals have no knowledge of balanced diet,they will get suffer from different disorders.To illustrate,diabetes is common disease nowadays.so,how can devouring of soft drinks decline if it boosts energy?
Now discussing solutions,regimes should arrange seminars for spreading awareness regarding healthy diet.To exemplify,yoga camps should be organized by lawmakers to gave knowledge of good food.Moreover,Government should impose tax on unhealthy food.beacuse people will not bought expensive food,they will give preference to homemade food.Eventually,healthy eating will be started among people.
To conclude,sugar based drinks are attracting folks nowadays.Although soft drinks are tasty yet lawmakers should impose tax on it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eading awareness regarding healthy diet.To exemplify,yoga camps should be organize...
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...awmakers to gave knowledge of good food.Moreover,Government should impose tax on unhealt...
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...se people will not bought expensive food,they will give preference to homemade food.E...
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Suggestion: Eventually
...y will give preference to homemade food.Eventually,healthy eating will be started among pe...
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Suggestion: , healthy
...e preference to homemade food.Eventually,healthy eating will be started among people. ...
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... be started among people. To conclude,sugar based drinks are attracting folks nowad...
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Suggestion: Although
...ed drinks are attracting folks nowadays.Although soft drinks are tasty yet lawmakers sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25136612022 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02429986451 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.886332965 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.0 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 20.7667163134 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14693219898 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961214973322 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410684065952 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961214973322 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410684065952 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.86 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ke of soft drinks has increased rapidly.There are multifarious reasons behind this tr...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...s instant energy and theses are cheaper.Also,the utilisation can be reduced by impos...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...stant energy and theses are cheaper.Also,the utilisation can be reduced by imposing ...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cold
...t healthy diet. To begin with reasons,cold drinks are delicious in taste.Masses ca...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Masses
...sons,cold drinks are delicious in taste.Masses can check different favours and they ca...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Resultantly
...fferent favours and they can taste them.Resultantly,they become addictive to it.In addition...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ours and they can taste them.Resultantly,they become addictive to it.In addition to t...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...Resultantly,they become addictive to it.In addition to this,there is a lack among ...
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Suggestion: , there
...come addictive to it.In addition to this,there is a lack among people about healthy di...
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Suggestion: When
... a lack among people about healthy diet.When individuals have no knowledge of balanc...
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Suggestion: , they
...duals have no knowledge of balanced diet,they will get suffer from different disorder...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...ill get suffer from different disorders.To illustrate,diabetes is common disease n...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , diabetes
...r from different disorders.To illustrate,diabetes is common disease nowadays.so,how can d...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , how
...e,diabetes is common disease nowadays.so,how can devouring of soft drinks decline if...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , regimes
...sts energy? Now discussing solutions,regimes should arrange seminars for spreading a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...eading awareness regarding healthy diet.To exemplify,yoga camps should be organize...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yoga
...ness regarding healthy diet.To exemplify,yoga camps should be organized by lawmakers ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...awmakers to gave knowledge of good food.Moreover,Government should impose tax on unhealt...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Government
... to gave knowledge of good food.Moreover,Government should impose tax on unhealthy food.bea...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'buy'
Suggestion: buy
... unhealthy food.beacuse people will not bought expensive food,they will give preferenc...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...se people will not bought expensive food,they will give preference to homemade food.E...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eventually
...y will give preference to homemade food.Eventually,healthy eating will be started among pe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , healthy
...e preference to homemade food.Eventually,healthy eating will be started among people. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sugar
... be started among people. To conclude,sugar based drinks are attracting folks nowad...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...ed drinks are attracting folks nowadays.Although soft drinks are tasty yet lawmakers sho...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25136612022 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02429986451 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.886332965 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.0 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 20.7667163134 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14693219898 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961214973322 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410684065952 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961214973322 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410684065952 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.86 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.