The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process for making sugar from sugar canes in manufacture.
Overall, there are seven steps to make sugar. The main ingredients are sugar canes collaborating with several tools to make sugar. The process starts with growing, then harvesting, corresponding with four crucial stages to produce sugar, which ends with drying and cooling.
Firstly, farmers grow sugar canes, and they nurture it from 12 to 18 months until the canes match standards. Next sugar canes are harvested by modern machines and by hands. Obviously, harvesting by machines is more productive than by hands. After collecting, sugar canes are crushed by a machine which has two circles on both sides, until they change into a liquid.
In the next stage, in order to purify juice, limestone filters are used. In the fifth step, the liquid which was purified, is heated by a cylindered tool. That leads to evaporation, and the juice becomes syrup. After that, by centrifuging, sugar crystals are separated from syrup. Finally, these crystals are dried and cooled, and the results are sugar that people normally swallow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54244827084 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7581763205 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316637062353 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123240805162 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137123861547 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2382533314 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155325360681 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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