The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture shows a series of processes to yield liquid chocolate from the cocoa trees thrived in three different areas (South America, Africa and Indonesia).
There are three main stages in the process, beginning with manual steps, raw material delivery, then continued with machine-processed chocolate.
Regarding the first stage, ripe red pods picked from cocoa trees are harvested to collect white cocoa beans, fermented for several days by banana leaves to strengthen its quality. When turning reddish after fermentation, the beans are laid out under the sun. At the second stage, dried beans are stored at average weight in large sacks which are continually transported by lorry to the factory.
Upon arrival at the factory, the baking tray of beans is put into a roasting machine with a certain temperature. Shortly afterward, they are poured into the separating unit to remove the outer shell from crushed beans. Finally, to extract the liquid chocolate after the winnowing process, the inner part of it is pressed by rollers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s South America, Africa and Indonesia. There are three main stages in the proce...
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...nued with machine-processed chocolate. Regarding the first stage, ripe red pods...
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...y transported by lorry to the factory. Upon arrival at the factory, the baking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21893491124 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65278883637 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.910152054 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0401633272936 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169919602485 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238054368973 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0290189144835 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236676618986 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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