The changes in town from toady to upcoming time

Essay topics:

The changes in town from toady to upcoming time

The map illustrates about the present and future layout of the town.

Overall, it is clear from the graph that there is only one way in centre of the railway line for crossing. Whereas, in future they will build roundabout for crossing.

By analysing data, yet town have only one way to cross the railway from the town centre to air field, to reach this location take second exit on A2 roundabout and go ahead till end of the road before end it’s located right side. The gas station is near to crossing.

By analysing further data, in upcoming time town will change according to proposed plan. In this plan, there will be huge changes in road ways, there will two new road develop fro transportation. Firstly, air field would be take a place for industrial zones for these they will develop direct road line from the railway to these area. Apart from that, town centre will have two way connectivity once is A4 road line, which directly connect to A2 road. Second one will roundabout in centre of the railway line, which will join the A2 roundabout. The gas station will be at there same place but outside road will commence beside the town centre.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...d ways, there will two new road develop fro transportation. Firstly, air field woul...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...op direct road line from the railway to these area. Apart from that, town centre will have...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, whereas, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64077669903 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25811134138 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2046258197 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9090909091 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179729981072 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764036682964 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899991646671 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985649282732 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412021043896 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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