Everyday, many species of plants and animals are declining. Offer the reason for the situation and some solution to it.
On a regular basis, it is observable that various species, not only animals but also plants are getting extinct. There are plenty of reasons for it, and the methods to overcome the problems is explained in below paragraphs.
Starting with the causes, the first and foremost is considering wild creatures as a threat. Human being assumes carnivores as a danger which provoke humans to kill them. hence, killing of mammals leads to leads to extinction of them. Then after, various species of plants are used for medical purposes. So, people cut them, but they rarely believe in growing them back as it requires a lot of time and energy. Therefore, less attention paid at regrowing the plants increases the chances of putting some species of plants and edge.
In order to overcome the issue, it is highly recommended for the government implement policies that prevent the loss of more plants or animals. For instance, the government should charge enough dollars as a fine for the people who chopped the plants off in a larger number than they were expected. Furthermore, the residence area should be far away from the forest area. This will encourage wild creatures as well as human beings to remain within their boundaries without disrupting each other’s lifestyle.
To sum up, finding the causes and making attempts to search for the solution will really prove beneficial to prevent the loss of animals and plants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'leads to'.
Suggestion: leads to
...to kill them. hence, killing of mammals leads to leads to extinction of them. Then after, various...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02953586498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53636690554 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4185788759 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212850532193 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652886591209 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652126239495 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120048306999 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198665450827 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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