More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks
studying abroad has become prevalent at the present. due to the cutting-edge technology, living standard makes a relentless competition for individuals especially students which are tend to leave nation to raise knowledge. therefore, I both agree and disagree about this state in some certain aspects.
To begin with, studying abroad will broaden individual horizon which enhances awareness and education . For instance, students get exposed to culture and lifestyle which are relatively novel to them . They’ll have opportunities to communicate people with multiple standpoints. therefore, students can orientate career through study processes, they’re able to explore new environment in order to make occupational decision. Basically, overseas students find learning challenged in country’s educational facilities since it cant supply abundance knowledge. Otherwise, exchange students gain more independence, they’re responsible for their food, bill and college paying monthly without parents’ sums. people will take care themselves directly when studying in another country in numerous living conditions.
On the other hand, there’re various of drawbacks in studying abroad. First of all, abroad students struggle with communication due to language barrier which is challenged in finding part-time jobs and befriending. For example, lack of vocabulary will cause problems with participating activities and analyzing objects accurately. Secondly, maladjustment can lead to culture shock- the disorientation in subjecting unfamiliar cultures. this is because people feel confused and anxiety when meeting citizens and learning the ways of new country. In addiction, emotional demanding is vital in single human who is prone to feel homesick and depressed in foreign circumstances; students are responsible for their feeling without any empathy whether introversion prevents approachable vibes from constructing relationships.
In conclusion, studying abroad has numerous benefits and drawbacks in perspectives while it depends on awareness, problem solving and ambitions. overseas students will have excellent way to advance their selves in experiencing vast horizon, on the contrary, dependence and timidity damage negatively to confidence and investigative ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26349206349 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18316694843 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673015873016 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5032696656 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.611111111 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245396308193 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07216093845 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724891683257 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135122754151 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374800389425 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.73 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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