Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people, like the homeless and unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the government should not dedicate the state budget to the international aid fund while in their own country there is still a situation where people have many problems in life such as homelessness or unemployment. From my perspective, I partially agree with the view for these several reasons.
To begin with, I recognize that the government should use the state budget for international aid as it will strengthen solidarity and build a strong sustainable linkage between different countries. In other words, we depend on others, it will be difficult to survive without support. For example, while the whole world is facing an infectious disease epidemic, a large number of people have died due to lack of treatment and medicine. Our neighboring country is no exception. It is during this difficult time that Vietnam has actively and actively helped by providing medical equipment as well as money to best support patients.
Although i can understand the arguments, i still think the state budget should be use to ensure the well-being of each individual in the country. First, the country that still has many poor residents will find it very difficult to be able to help others because their own problems are still unresolved. More specifically, governments can help their dwellers get rid of poverty with large sums of money. Furthermore, instead of international aid, the government budget can be allocated to improving the development of its own economy. For instance, more job opportunities will be created from factories being set up in the country, thereby reducing unemployment, or people can improve their standard of living by focusing on services. community such as health, equipment, residence, ....
To conclude , spending money on improving themselves is good but contributing to foreign aid to strengthen solidarity has more advantages so I think the government should give international aid with control and to an appropriate extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ney to best support patients. Although i can understand the arguments, i still t...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... still think the state budget should be use to ensure the well-being of each indivi...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... still think the state budget should be use to ensure the well-being of each indivi...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernments can help their dwellers get rid of poverty with large sums of money. Fur...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Community
...dard of living by focusing on services. community such as health, equipment, residence, ....
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... equipment, residence, .... To conclude , spending money on improving themselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29936305732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03863389472 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0999933197 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248141816991 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763529901947 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088925802108 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17358379785 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816941690502 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.