Some People Say It Is Possible To Tell A Lot About A Person’s Culture From Their Choice Of Clothes
Every culture has different beliefs and standards, and it is thought that we can discern these differences from the choices of clothes a person from a particular culture make. This essay partially agrees with this notion because gadgets can certainly reflect a culture’s values. However, that may prove to be incorrect with the exposure people get from other cultures.
A culture’s beliefs are reflected in the kind of clothes a person from that culture wears. Clothes are often part of the criteria to judge how you are as a human being, and humans, instinctively, want to express their values. As clothes provide an easy and effective way to do that as clothes are a necessity in everyday life. For instance, women in Iran have to wear a ‘Hijab’ to hide their hair because of the beliefs there.
With the exposure our current development technology gives us, it is increasingly hard to discern a person’s culture. As people can easily communicate and see what people are wearing around the world, some may change their clothes to more general, cross-culture ones that may be a mix of numerous cultures or don’t represent their own cultural values. For example, myriad teenagers are choosing clothes that are considered fashionable in a different country like Korea that have a different beauty standard from theirs.
In conclusion, whilst I agree that clothes can indeed tell us about a person’s culture, this will gradually disappear as people communicate, exchange and learn about other cultures that are different from their own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1581027668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78256939426 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1312965178 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389601645684 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138360080026 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103584170671 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247926810764 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423138143306 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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