Many historical sites and museums mainly visited by tourist, not local people. why is this the case? what can be done to attract local people to visit this historical sites and museums?
It is undeniable that chronological places and museums play a part and parcel role in every individual's life. However, research has shown that, over the last few decades the rate of visiting historical sites and exhibitions by trevelers is fundamentally higher compared to the domestic inhabitants. This situations arising due to the lack of awareness and familiarity but there are some viable solutions to tackle this paradidigm.
To commence with, there are two predominant reasons behind this conundrum. The foremost reason is the familiarity and proximity. Owing to community take archeological sites and gallary for granted and assume that they can visit them anytime since they are easily accessible. Second pivotal reason which should be taken into account is time constraints and priorities for local people regardless of few citizens who are aware about the exact value of artifacts. To elaborate, in this fast-paced world every natives not only have their hectic schedules but also they are engaged in their work obligations which limit their leisure time.
for example, denizens ought to do hardworks in order to cater their desires and dreams, because of this reason domestic people are less likely to visit museums and other historical places and prioratise other things over culturcul exploration.
Despite the give reasons, there are noteworthy possible solution which can Solve this obstacle. One possibe solution to deal with it is education and collaboration with schools and collages. To explain further, they can associate and upgrade education programs and introduce local history and cultural heritage in their syllabus. Besides this, they can arrange a workshops and guided toures regarding vintage places in order to spread perceptions among domestic residents. Additionally, promotions and marketings has also play valuable role in awareness. Vernacular people will stimulate provided that they spread cognizance through the advertisements as it is quite convenient way for individual's to understand.
To recapitulate, due to the familiarity, closeness and time limitations denizens do not opt to visit vintage places. However, this trend can be changed by the help of education, marketing and promotion system.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58944281525 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92248418658 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601173020528 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4974411986 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265986133999 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679335761317 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464646965419 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142727115521 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313589508466 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.