Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A matter of great concern today is the ubiquitous use of social media which is considered as a big problem. The Phenomenon has led to the shorter attention spans that trigger a controversial discussion. The focus of this essay is to shed light on the reasons for my opinions while I firmly agree with this statement.
To begin with, I can’t deny how crucial social media is, thus it’s the main device in the majority of people's lives. As soon as, it is becoming more and more compulsory because of its role which contributes a lot of convenient tools for users. In fact, people might use this gadget as a supporter as well as an entertainment program. Therefore, some people are getting more obsessed with using social media which results in reducing their time of focusing. According to some studies, using social for a long time in a specific term is capable of stressing out yourself while it makes people become lazy and doesn’t give attention to your work. A good example of this is youngsters nowadays spend a great amount of their time so as to play games, chat with friends and surf newsfeed. That’s how youngsters waste their time instead of learning, playing sports. Moreover, using social media over standard regulation leads to many psychological problems. It’s the result of repressed information which might pressure your mind and mental health. For instance, the learning disorders and antisocial which appear in young generations. It’s a burden for many families.
Furthermore, social media is the reason that the number of children’s outside activities has been declining over the years. This is because they get more addicted to social media, online activities than playing time for others or communicating in real life might not exist.
In conclusion, I am supportive of this extent. Personally, I believe people should pay more attention to their work and give concerned about real life relationships.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...days spend a great amount of their time so as to play games, chat with friends and surf ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.084375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78302436378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8650396193 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164424759682 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534249379744 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450646938547 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103351886488 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396512485968 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 726, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...days spend a great amount of their time so as to play games, chat with friends and surf ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.084375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78302436378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8650396193 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164424759682 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534249379744 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450646938547 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103351886488 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396512485968 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.