You work for an international company. And would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country .
Write a letter to your manager
Explain why you want to work there
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for her help in arranging it
Dear Ms Neha,
I am writing to inform that I would like to apply my skills in our company's main head office ,which is in America, for half a year.
I am planning to to to the United States next month since I have been selected in lottery visa. I would hope that I already mentioned that while were tackling the aardous task the other day. So that I assume that it is a good a golden opportunity to continue my work as a software engineer in our ABC company's head office ,which is in california, as our main office is located there. However, I will be back after six months to continue my work here because may plab is to let my family stay there and I am coming afterwards.
I am aware that I have a lot of projects that need to be done. Beside that , I also need to meet my clients too. Thus, I have requested my assistant to take over my responsibilities which have to be done while I am away and he also agreed to that.
I was wandering if you could give permission to switch my working place for half a year and please watch over my assistant incase he makes any mistakes. But , I would hope he will not cause any trouble since he is the best employee. Moreover , I would appreciate if you could get my documents done as soon as possible as I do not have plenty of time.
Im looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Kindly regards,
Baskaran thadshayini.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... skills in our companys main head office ,which is in America, for half a year. ...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ica, for half a year. I am planning to to to the United States next month since I...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e other day. So that I assume that it is a good a golden opportunity to continue ...
^^
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...engineer in our ABC companys head office ,which is in california, as our main offi...
^^
Line 6, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ojects that need to be done. Beside that , I also need to meet my clients too. Thu...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WAS_WANDERING_IF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wondering'?
Suggestion: wondering
...y and he also agreed to that. I was wandering if you could give permission to switch ...
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Line 8, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...istant incase he makes any mistakes. But , I would hope he will not cause any trou...
^^
Line 8, column 243, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...since he is the best employee. Moreover , I would appreciate if you could get my ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ble as I do not have plenty of time. Im looking forward to your reply at your e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29657794677 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52310259318 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8367188914 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222375517198 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683077648442 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500508664616 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986208688971 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577363838213 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.