There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the growth technology is more important to improvement in people lives, for example technology is the great way for support carrier, bussines, education and many more. I completely agree with this statement because it has more advantages rather than disadvantages for some reasons.
In the one hand, the main benefit of this issue is easy to get a accurate information about job. and some knowlage from any platform, it is because they provide all of you need to have a tip for example undergraduate or fresgraduate not to be worried on this happens, they can apply for job in every website, such us jobstreet.com and linked.just send cv and other requirement in the company. There so many job avalaible for society. It is no doubt that technology is more popular to simplify human in this world.
However there are some drawbacks of this case. Firstly technology it’s more dangerous for children because the child more quick for addicted with the technology, for example they prefer to spend time for using gadget like play some games or watching video in commercial platform, even giving comment to viral content wich they never know. Secondly technology can undermine the intellection of children, it is due to their parents didn’t give education how to using gadget and social media, what kinds of content they should watch. In social media for instance they offer many entertain for consument, even there is a negative advertisement like vident show, pornography, gambling and fraud. Therefore their parents must be careful to grant the children a breeding for that. It’s important for children adopt more positive side of technology in the future, that’s why parents is one of essential source to manage and confine of utilization technology.
To sum up, it is evident that many people can enjoy the benefit of technology. In my perspective technology is a great ways for get information from any place in this world and I felt that. It depends on user to employ the technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in benefit of this issue is easy to get a accurate information about job. and som...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...o get a accurate information about job. and some knowlage from any platform, it is ...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
...er requirement in the company. There so many job avalaible for society. It is no doubt t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...pular to simplify human in this world. However there are some drawbacks of this case. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... show, pornography, gambling and fraud. Therefore their parents must be careful to grant ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...In my perspective technology is a great ways for get information from any place in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00595238095 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79023214234 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0932789523 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968037909924 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387071103805 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304384367345 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734776013186 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254880014841 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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