The table shows the number of mobile phones and personal computer per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 different countries.
The tabular data depites the information about The number of people per thousand who has owned smartphones and Pcs in Luxemburg, Italy, Sinapore, germany South Korea and chine in the year of 2003.
Overall, it can be manifested that Luxemburg had the highest number of mobile phones as well as pc owners; However, least number of cell phone holder and pc holder were observed in china.
After analysing, it Can be seen clearly that the number of mobile phone holders and рс owners in Luxemburg showed maximum number with 872 and 900 people per thousand respectively. A negligible difference was observed in both mobile phone and computer owners in the singapore. while, Chinese people had minimum number of PC, which accounted to ,35 for mobile phones ans 88 for pc holders.
The table further collates that, Germany and South Korea had identical figure for PC Owners (452 per thousand people ) and mobile Phone holders accounted for 586 for former Country and 380 for latter one. An astronomical number of people in Italy has mobile phones which was 737 and 257 less for pc owners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the least
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92934782609 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43123164 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0201768825 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346999755361 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172183950586 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417872453308 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202718103068 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776896601006 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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