There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that money is the main driver for workers to continue their job. Personally, I completely agree with this view since money is essential to maintain people’ daily life activities, and it provides them the chance to change their lives.
Adults need money to buy food, groceries, pay the bills, and pay for their offspring’s education. Weaker physics and mentality resulting from lack of basic needs fulfillment can cause collapse in both physical and mental health, which then make people become unable to work. This then results in a plummet in the working force, leading to more significant problems such as higher rate of unemployment.
Money gives people from different social levels life-changing chances to complete their plans. A pertinent example of this is that homeless people could rent a house by having a part-time or full-time job. Money could help the underprivileged to enhance their living standards, therefore, partially develop the society and economy.
In conclusion, for the mentioned justifications, I maintain that money helps people to fulfill their basic needs and create significant opportunities for their future, therefore, it is the primary factor that motivates people to go to work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42783505155 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88656572147 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4997076014 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136110766001 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563563207497 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430736230197 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910457288679 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446612102423 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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