You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Read the following text from a book about staying single.
Over the last twenty years, there has been a huge increase in the number of people who remain single. Most people who live alone are young adults who postpone marriage into their late twenties, but some are in their thirties and forties. One reason they often give for staying single is that they have not met the right person. Others say that marriage involves too much commitment and responsibility, or that they prefer the single lifestyle.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the causes of this trend and possible effects of this trend to the society. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
In recent years, there has been an increasing number of people who opt to stay single instead of getting engaged. Although noticeable, the influences of this tendency have not been realized by many residents. This essay will shed light on causes of this trend as well as its effects.
To commence with, being singleton has become more popular among young adults due to some reasons. First and foremost, some figures think marriage has too much commitment and responsibility. For instance, people must get along with their spouse’s family and visit their sibling whenever returning to the hometown. Moreover, they are responsible for childbearing and child-rearing after they have gotten married, which is such a stressful task as some people are really busy with their work. The second reason that leads to single status is that some opinions support remaining single in order to concentrate on careers. To be more detailed, they think that if they are alone, they could spend the majority of their time working and getting promotions. As a result, they could have a deserved salary and a sense of fulfillment.
All the causes above have led to several effects on both family and society. At first, it makes the population of their country aging which results in lacking human resources in their country’s labor market. Secondly, their parents would be so upset as they don’t have grandchildren. It can be clearly seen in single-child families if their children make a decision not to get married, those families must be living so lonely.
All in all, the above-mentioned factors have outlined the causes as well as the influences of this trend. Its causes should be taken into account. Government should be more aware of the impact of this issue in order to have feasible solutions for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03344481605 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68651196947 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5481726449 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131634529725 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439384362641 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636711269876 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089547289577 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732080933056 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.