Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
It is true that the frequency of juvenile delinquency is rising in urban areas around the world. The consequences of this could be severe, and governments could take several measures to address this issue.
Young people are often protected by the laws as they are considered unaware of their actions. This leads to situations where young criminals feel no regret in their actions and have the tendency to repeat it after being punished. As they grow up, those youngsters would continue creating crimes and become unemployed people, who are uneducated and have a history of crimes. A corrupted society, where major metropolitan areas are full of chaos, as a result, could end the development of human society.
Government bodies, therefore, should take steps to tackle this problem. The first one could be facilitating the study of the underprivileged, which is the major source of juvenile crimes. Young criminals are often poor children who are prevented from decent education. As they have few choices for their future, they often take risks to participate in crimes to make ends meet. The second one could be some changes in the law concerning crimes committed by today’s young. The authorities could enforce regulations that strictly punish youngsters who commit crimes so that they would change after the punishments.
In conclusion, crimes committed by young criminals could result in a corrupted society, therefore, the governments should facilitate the education of children in poor areas and implement strict regulations for young people who are committed to crimes to prevent it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks participating'.
Suggestion: risks participating
...oices for their future, they often take risks to participate in crimes to make ends meet. The second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2874015748 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81193053149 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7828927414 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200320201978 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716973213511 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433530775812 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13068450612 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039570191539 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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