Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?
Many perpetrators carry out more crimes once they are free and not imprisonment.
This essay will argue the reasons of acting this way and how this could influence and contaminate law-abiding citizens.
To begin with, most of the significant reasons for criminals tending to reoffend crimes is throwing them back to society without passing by rehabilitation programs by government. After finishing their punishment period, offenders lose confidence and the ability of function prosocially. For instance, by retraining them how to interact in various situations with their community showing kindness, respect and being helpful to others, those offenders will learn how to eliminate delinquents’ attitudes toward family and society and get involved in the community again. Furthermore, money is the main inducement of many crimes, such as shoplifting, robbery, burglary, and forth. So, when they are suffering from finding regular employment once they are released, it will be principal incentive for recommitting crimes to help themselves get a living and reintegrate back into society.
On the other hand, Crime does not just affect individuals. Communities which experience higher levels of crime are also adversely affected. People may become frightened inside or outside their own home; home insurance premiums can rise; property prices are affected; homeowners can find it more difficult to sell their property; new businesses may avoid the area; existing businesses may close down due to repeated thefts and loss of income; costs of repairing damage from vandalism and loss of customers in the area exposed to violent actions.
In conclusion, most of the considerable reasons for offenders to re-offend crimes is governments’ unfollowing strict programs for rehabilitation before represent those people to their community one more time. In addition to giving them a hand finding a suitable job to decrease their negative attitudes regarding society and their financial struggle. Furthermore, crimes influence both individuals and the whole community, as spread of crimes makes people feel unsafe even they are in their houses or even out and it mainly affects the national economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5975975976 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96208763414 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.4505305107 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.384615385 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148103712489 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549812583542 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471946041147 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951981433752 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496529399021 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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