Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent period, alot of people travel different cultural countries. So, some people believe that visitors should adopt the method of living and cultural of that specific country, while other shows their agreement towards the acceptance of cultural difference. I have discussed both the views and have imparted my opinion at the end.
Taking in account the views of former, making the tourists to adapt to the costume and lifestyle of the specific country will allow them to know about the culture of that country closely. It is believed that one will be able to learn more when they engage themselve totally in in what people from that specific location is doing. For instance, if the tourist eat and dress up like rajathani people, then they will understand how important it is to survive against the heat at that specific area. Furthermore, same apperal will help them to feel included. For example, if the localites are wearing their folk dress, while the traveler wearing the western outfit, then it will make him stand apart from the rest of the people which might make him feel excluded. Hence, wearing the local attire not only smoothens their stay but also will help them to feel belonged.
Considering the opinions of later, allowing travellers to dress up as per their culture will allow us to learn about their culture in-person. All people have studied about the outfilt of different culture via books or internet. So, if they see people wearing different outfit, they can ask question about their look, their importance, and their value. Therefore, encouraging the explorers their national outfit will allow us to learn about their culture.
In my view, accepting their originality will show the value of the people from the host country. Hence, we should not force them to dress as ourselves because it will show how the people from the specific country think.
To conclude, letting people to dress up the way they want promotes learning and their acceptance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...more when they engage themselve totally in in what people from that specific location...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00604229607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38158078896 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525679758308 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1000283447 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181357755566 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682028675644 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621284256745 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118017709596 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910471685424 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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