The following is a letter to the head of the tourism bureau on the island of Tria.
"Erosion of beach sand along the shores of Tria Island is a serious threat to our island and our tourist industry. In order to stop the erosion, we should charge people for using the beaches. Although this solution may annoy a few tourists in the short term, it will raise money for replenishing the sand. Replenishing the sand, as was done to protect buildings on the nearby island of Batia, will help protect buildings along our shores, thereby reducing these buildings' risk of additional damage from severe storms. And since beaches and buildings in the area will be preserved, Tria's tourist industry will improve over the long term."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
From the passage, the author mainly indicate the erosion problem of beach sand along the shores of Tria. this type of environmental diseaster seems very much deterimental to the local infrasturcture as well as effected the lifestyle of the belongings beside the seashore. The tourism bureau of the island takes some steps including to charge on the using the tourist place. it is kind of a beneficial decision in the economical purposes to develop the whole area sturctural decoration and to resolve the erosion.But that takes a negative impression between the tourists.According to the incident, the authority should think about the enjoyment and refreshmrent facilities in a easy and comfortable manner.
The visiting place should be cared with more resposibilities and co-operation of the all visitors and loacalities.At the same time, a unreliable decision may impact the visting rate of the tourist.Furthermore,the business and income which is more depended on the aesthetic beauty lover will be less at consequentially. The local people will not be able to get enough livelihood though their all kinds of amendities is kept safe.And some types of economical barrier also be seen towards them.
The authority also believe that earning more money from this sector will be helpful to build a sustainable and strong living place. But in this weak point they do not keep in measure the reducing number of the tourist can result the lessen the profit.As a result, the progessive plan executing as charging the visitors amy face some difficulties. The tourist may avoid this spot for saving their money and this brings a huge differences in the numbers of them.
So, it is very clear from this argument that decision made by the tourist bureau is not so much prescient and foresighted. From that perspect the visitors can be taken under some circumstances to put a good result and being more careful about the better prosperity of the sea shore
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 50 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1600 1500
No. of Different Words: 186 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.908 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.777 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.418 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.668 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...of beach sand along the shores of Tria. this type of environmental diseaster seems v...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... charge on the using the tourist place. it is kind of a beneficial decision in the...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...e on the using the tourist place. it is kind of a beneficial decision in the economical p...
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Suggestion: But
...l decoration and to resolve the erosion.But that takes a negative impression betwee...
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Suggestion: According
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...njoyment and refreshmrent facilities in a easy and comfortable manner. The visit...
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Suggestion: At
...ion of the all visitors and loacalities.At the same time, a unreliable decision ma...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: And
...ir all kinds of amendities is kept safe.And some types of economical barrier also b...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (amy) must be used with a third-person verb: 'faces'.
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'difference'?
Suggestion: difference
...ving their money and this brings a huge differences in the numbers of them. So, it is very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10344827586 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10662893911 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3355894038 57.8364921388 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.324526521 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.70786347227 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122868014911 0.218282227539 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554907534015 0.0743258471296 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758847351652 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713086192678 0.128457276422 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647363512755 0.0628817314937 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.3799401198 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.3550499002 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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