Both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, the number of dual- income families is increasing; therefore, male and female should share housework with each other. Personally, I completely agree with this point of view.
To commence with, due to the promotion of gender equally, either men or women should be encouraged to follow their dreams, goals or careers instead of the traditional stereotypes about women that they should just go around kitchens or do all the household chores. It is not unfair that working women are expected to do all the jobs around the house when, along with men, they aslo contribute to financial of family or they can even be breadwinners. In the fast pace of modern life, both working men and women must adopt new roles and responsibilities.
On the other hand, sharing household chores in dual-earner families can bring a lot of benefits. Initially, doing housework together can reduce the burden on one partner, preventing burn out and resentment. Hence, it can reduce some arguments and maintain the mental comfort. When male and female share either financial or household responsibilities with each other, it can be a chance to spend quality time and empathize with their partner. As a result, they can strengthen family bond and create a supportive environment. Many research studies have shown that couples who share household responsibilities tend to have more satifying and enduring relationships.
In conclusion, it is suitable that men and women should do housework together as either that they both have their own nine-to-five jobs or this tendency can improve the family’s bond.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17760617761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92534175176 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0279536719 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170386544598 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632519370542 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421894057409 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100047787216 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407698057205 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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