The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the pounds spent on five different items by two European countries France and the UK in 2010. Overall, the French people paid more for computers and perfume, whereas cars, books, and cameras were considered more by British people. Moreover, the highest and lowest differences are between cameras and computers respectively.
The most allocated cost was related to the cars in both countries. Indeed, the amount of money spent on cars in the UK was around 450,000 pounds and in France was equal to 400,000 pounds. In spite of the fact that the total cost spent on books and computers is similar, the UK residents were more interested in books (had spent approximately 400,000 pounds) compared to the French people who spent more on computers (about 375,000 pounds).
Turning to two other goods, it is clear that less money is appropriated to them; nevertheless, the spent pounds on cameras in the UK (close to 350.000 pounds) is considerably more than the France (150.000 pounds). On the other hand, the French people spent 150.000 pounds on perfumes that is about 50.000 pounds more than the UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, whereas, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94680851064 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54391043628 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3914887195 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0480794939687 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316038763807 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721176955979 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445681597317 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496619113382 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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