Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people recall feeling very restricted as teenagers, and that becoming an adult generally meant being happier than they were. However, it seems that those same people frequently yearn to return to their childhood as soon as they encounter the pressures of maturity. This shift in attitudes may start a debate about which age groups are the happiest.
It is possible to make a convincing argument that children and teens are the most joyful and delighted groups of people. Indeed, one may argue that children hold no or little responsibility for their activities. As a result, the young can engage in whatever activity they want, unless it is immediately dangerous. In addition, young people have more leisure time and make more friends than adults. Thus, their life may be full of easygoing fun with their peers, leading to high levels of happiness.
On the other side, other people claim that the older they become, the more satisfaction they get out of life. In my opinion, this viewpoint is also fairly reasonable. Becoming an adult often involves enjoying the freedom of choice and action that the younger generation does not have. This independence, when combined with experience and a deep awareness of one’s own interests and motivations, can lead to highly satisfying and meaningful lives, complete with excellent careers, interesting hobbies, and loving families.
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In conclusion, I would say that both periods of life have their joys and sorrows and how happy people of different ages feel greatly depends on each individual. Still, think that life can and should be enjoyed at any age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15209125475 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65568665365 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665399239544 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7512398643 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188610379145 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568153199069 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04652131808 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106857103928 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227970152636 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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