In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects.
Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Tourism is becoming popular day by day whole over the world. There are many countries like Maldives, Srilanka, Indonesia, Italy are largely dependant on tourism economy. It is an ongoing debate that international tourism may provide benefit to national economy but it also negatively affects it socio economic situation. However, I beleive that tourism has more positive impact that take over the downsides. In the following writings, I will describe the rationale behind my opinion.
To begin with the positive sides, due to international tourism, people need to go through immigration administrative procedures, that generates a large amount of revenue to the national GDP. Moreover, it increases the employment opportunities in the immigration sector to handle the large number of foreiners that are intending to visit the resepctive country. Secondly, when foreingers come to spend some leisure time, they spend liquid money that helps to boost local economy. Additionally, this creates business opportunities for local people. In turn it reduces the unemployemnt in the local people. Thirdly, international tourism prompt the government to protect the local heritage and touristic places, which improves a country's profile and raises the recognition worldwide. For example, Indonesia is not a country that world recognize it as good country, but people know it due to Bali which is a famous place for tourism. More positive side to add that intenational tourism helps improving culture by sharing local culture to the interntional community.
Nevertheless, there are some negative sides like, it may affect national security which reduces the reputation of law enforcement agency. There are some repsorts like allowing more people to visit a place affect the local heritage and environment.
To sum up, even though there are negative sides but in respect to the benefit that a country achieve due to international tourism is ignorable. If government can take proper steps to control the downsides, international tourism will tremendously benefit a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ive sides, due to international tourism, people need to go through immigration ad...
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...worldwide. For example, Indonesia is not a country that world recognize it as goo...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
... to add that intenational tourism helps improving culture by sharing local culture to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53312302839 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.008527786 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0125412865 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.176470588 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232828652963 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735959793156 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681196239683 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149121233708 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871325920814 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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