College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Education play's an vital role in defining future of individual's as well as of the nation's. Education helps build knowledge about in a field where individuals have interest in. Educational institution for early age teaches discipline, behaviour, personality and many more aspect's for being a good person and erudite. Which an individual can use to driven nation's and other field's future, according to the need's and requirement's. Education is must for everyone in order to drive future in specific way.
First is the example of Bill Gates, the ex-CEO and Co-Founder of Microsoft Corporation. He was smart and enthusiastic from early age of computer engineering and programming. He wrote program to build Graphical User Interface based Operating System which was revolutionary in order to abandon the use of command line to the user. What if he would have pursued his career in the area of field where jobs where abundant, then we would be unable to to view such an incredible Operating system.
Second is the example of Elon Musk, the founder and CEO of various organisation like Paypal, Tesla, SpaceX and Neuralink. He is mostly recognised for the contribution in the field of Banking Sector. He just abandoned the conventional procedure of going to bank for any banking related stuff's instead he revolutionized by making every banking transaction's completely remote. What if he would have pursued the career in the area where job's were plenty ? We would had never witnessed the revolution.
Third is the example of APJ Abdul Kalam, the missile Man of the India. Who is recognised for his contribution in India's defence sector, by creating missile solely based on his knowledge. Even though not having enough money to pursue career in this field, he tried his best to grab scholarship which eliminated money related problem's. What if he would have pursued career in any other sector where job's are more ? India's defence sector would have taken more year's to develop their first missile.
I do not agree with the statement, college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. It totally depends on the individuals interest, if a person pursue career in his/her area of interest, then he/she gives 100% in order to learn more in that sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Education plays an vital role in defining future of indivi...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had pursued'?
Suggestion: had pursued
...of command line to the user. What if he would have pursued his career in the area of field where j...
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Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...where abundant, then we would be unable to to view such an incredible Operating syste...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had pursued'?
Suggestion: had pursued
...nsactions completely remote. What if he would have pursued the career in the area where jobs were ...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... area where jobs were plenty ? We would had never witnessed the revolution. Third ...
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Message: Did you mean 'had pursued'?
Suggestion: had pursued
...ated money related problems. What if he would have pursued career in any other sector where jobs a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, third, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00523560209 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76291160835 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544502617801 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6612240859 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0476190476 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211012257411 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682182127142 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165209719901 0.0758088955206 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143121589441 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153482995702 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.