Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who is responsible for preventing environmental damage?
In modern life, numerous countries have to face environmental damage. This problem is the result of major reasons. And depending on each level, responsibilities of parties are different. This essay will discuss causes of environmental damage and whose responsibility for preventing this damage is.
Environmental damage is a global problem, and this challenge is caused by a variety of factors. To begin with, industrial activities would significantly impact the environment. Heavy industries, factories, manufacturing have released amounts of gas emission, chemicals and waste products to air, water and soil that contribute to environmental pollution. Secondly, the decrease of a large area of forest in the world can damage the environment. Deforestation for agriculture, urban development, wood gathering can bring about habitat destruction, loss of biodiversity, and contribute to climate change. Moreover, urbanization can cause many environmental problems. The expansion of cities and urban areas would result in destruction of natural habitat, increase consumption energy and create more waste.
To prevent environmental damage, it is necessary for collaboration between governments, organizations, businesses and individuals. National authorities and governments play a crucial role in issuing and forcing people to obey policies and laws to protect the environment. They can also provide tax incentives for sustainable activities and invest in green infrastructure. Industries would be a significantly important part in protecting the environment. Businesses can reduce gas emission and invest in green technology. Individuals need to raise awareness about the environment, especially in daily life activities such as using eco-friendly products, reducing rubbish and energy consumption. Because of the global nature of environmental problems, international cooperations and agreements are crucial. Countries should collaborate and deal with issues including climate change, loss of biodiversity and pollution.
In conclusion, environmental damage is a combination of many causes and to tackle this status requires much effort from all parties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12871287129 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53568717108 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9478010171 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.85 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439082143143 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127542831757 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112665245708 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281014003372 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910373993219 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.41 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.68 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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