Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed by some group of persons that we should avoid paying tax to the state and keep all the money with us. I strogly disagree with them.In the following paragraphs, i will justify my disagreement with the help of supportive statements.
To begin with, I believe that it is not only illegal or crime to not pay tax to the government but it is also a poor example we set for our younger generations. Taxes are deducted from our income for the betterment of our state or nation. The huge part of taxation goes to the income and resources of nation security. The soldiers at the border or the local police force makes it possible to live without fear, so we should not hesitate to pay tax.
Another good reason which supports that tax deduction is genuine and needed is that the funds collected in the form of tax is used for the betterment or beauty of state. A state will always remain under developed if it donot have basic ammenities for it's citizen. Morever, the beauty of state attracts tourist , hence brings more income and identity of the country.
To conclude, I will strongly believe that we should become a responsible citizen and honestly pay our tax to the state. Tax money is used for our safety, beauty of our state which further makes us feel proud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, honestly, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58441558442 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45472908023 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9859471218 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2727272727 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250106814738 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100692560731 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966679749035 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162071706517 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557452792357 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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